   Arschloch 2004-04-02 . chapter 7Really great so far, and I hope you continue it soon. |
 A Girl in Denial 2004-03-01 . chapter 7Very nice, I like this chapter a lot. Just a few edits need to be made here and there. You have sentences that aren't capitalized, and lack of spacing. Also, the word "apogetly" -- what word is that? (Apologetically, I think, but I'm not sure that's the right spelling either.) Anyway, good job, I hope to see a new chapter soon!
agid |
| A Girl in Denial 2004-02-04 . chapter 6 This is getting very interesting. Please write more soon!
agid |
| A Girl in Denial 2004-01-25 . chapter 5 Very good. Must I tell you to keep going? All righty then. KEEP GOING!
agid |
| A Girl in Denial 2004-01-15 . chapter 4 Woo, nice!! I want to know what happens! KEEP WRITING! And read some of my stuff if you have time. ^^
agid |
| A Girl in Denial 2004-01-02 . chapter 3 omg... Thats really great. Keep it up!
agid |
| A Girl in Denial 2004-01-02 . chapter 2 O_O very good. I can feel her fear.
agid |
 Dark Evening 2003-12-31 . chapter 1OOh. Very science fictiony-ish. Wait, that's not what i'm trying to describe. sigh. Oh well. Anyways, i hope to read more! =D keep it up.
Later.
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| A Girl in Denial 2003-12-31 . chapter 1 O_O Wow. This is really well written. Only thing I would do is divide it into paragraphs for better readability. This is excellent!
agid |
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