I actually really, really liked this. :) This line in particular:

"My heart was pained inside of me,
with every piece you took."

Good job.

another good yet morose poem by a good yet morose poet.

oh wow. I've known that feeling more than once. Oh, how horribly painful it is. I remember feeling almost physical pain too. Very beautiful and heartfelt.

-Amy

I really like this one. =D It's written quite well and I couldn't help but review after your childish plea. Lol.

yet another 1 tht is close to an experiense i had, this chic i liked, i thought she liked me n wen i told her she stopped talking to me.. oops i think its a bit of an overshare sorri