You have a lovely and interesting imagination. I've read a few of your other works and they are stunning. Three words- Keep-it-up!

Very interesting. It seems to me that you find the world and the body's strange reactions almost as enticing as I do. Its odd how morbid things tend to inspire us. Very beautifully written as is the one called Tears of Ice I just read from you. You're on a roll babe. Beautiful titles also.
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Camaro

VEry vivid, the pain the emotion and the intensity of this poem. Great work writing it.