Sometimes the actual writting is not important at all. Here, I don't even want to mention it because regardless of how good it might be,(or to stay neutral, how bad)the heart you put into it, the ability it gives its reader to experience more than mere words is worth a thousant such words, and that number once over again. I thank you for this piece. I know that I, and any who may come across it are better for it.

- Vigilant

:( Well that was depressing. But it was good. You REALLY caught the emotions well. =)

That was so good, it was so sad and had soo much feeling. Keep writing, you're good!

when i read this, i just wanted to review this. but i don't know what to say about it.
I feel that it deserves a review. It's very emotional. Not at all unbearable.