I loved it! And you're right; it does feel real. It's tragic; but with a bittersweet outcome in the end. Nice job, sweetie! I'm in the mood to write a dark poem now. ^-^

I can certainly understand why you'd wish this didn't feel quite so real. I kinda wish the same, after reading this.
Short but awesome, just the way I like my stories.

Ok now I'm all choked up. It's so...bittersweet...