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| Azure Angel of Light 2006-04-23 ch 1,  | abuseYour writing is too rushed. One minute Robyn is shy and all and the next, she's confident and knows her way. You also haven't shown her character. As well as that, there's no description of the school or of any other female students. |
| Nacomis 2005-06-14 ch 15, | abusewow this story is really good i dont know if you are going to continue it or if it is completed but if you are going to continue update please |
| Pretty Lost 2005-06-08 ch 15, | abuseGreat Story!! luving it...update soon! |
| Shades Of A Tulip 2005-05-30 ch 11, | abuseHi again. Listen, ur on my lists and 2 stories of urs! I'd like to help u out. I know a name for chapter 11: Mandella's Set Up Attempt. Or: The Set Up and Concert. Maybe: Jealous of Aaron. |
| Bailey Martin 2005-05-29 ch 15, anon. | abuseO MY GOD! It took me days to read this! I loved it! If you don't continue, o just continue!Hey stop and read The Slumberous Party in Humor by BAILEY MARTIN! UPDATE! |
| ErgoSchmergo 2004-12-31 ch 15, | abuseahh, u aren't just gonna leave it there are u? u better not! lol very well written. yea, nothing to add, just update or sumthn, don't leave it at that lol |
| jeb315 2004-12-29 ch 15, | abusei enjoyed this it was really akward at times but not bad. I hope u right another couple chapters to this story |
| Close Your Eyes and Dream 2004-12-16 ch 14, | abuseI realized that i put god i meant GOOD! |
| Close Your Eyes and Dream 2004-12-09 ch 15, | abusethis is GOD! PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE! |
| StuckInTwilight 2004-12-08 ch 15, | abusenext chapter soon! |
| StuckInTwilight 2004-12-07 ch 3, | abuseThas hot! i like it keep going! |
| gottawrite21 2004-10-29 ch 1, | abuseGREAT JOB MAN. IT WAS SO SAD> IT HAD A GREAT ENDING! |
| beautifulforest 2004-08-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh that is so sad! I keep telling Robyn NOT to go to the pizza place, I keep telling her no! The emotions are very well written. Good job!! |
| tinytot81 2004-07-27 ch 15, | abusethat was great once again another great story please update soon this is a great story so yeah please update soon and stuff well later days and peace out Tinytot81 |
| QueenRemge13 2004-06-08 ch 15, | abuseGood chapter. Is the story over though? I don't want it to be yet!! You have to finish it!! :-D Please? QR |