Reviews for Through Engravements of Truth

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Stahlut 2007-10-11 ch 32,	abusewow I actually finally read this. I read yor first story, but never got around to this one. anyway I really did like it. I htink it was a good conclusion, and it worked really well. a great way to end such a dramatic story.
Gentle. Edge. 2007-08-30 ch 32,	abuseI couldn't stop reading your story! Great job! :D :D
Gentle. Edge. 2007-08-30 ch 1,	abuseI think it's interesting how her life has changed into this. I liked how you made her write the original. :)
LadyLush 2007-06-16 ch 32,	abuseaw i loved this story (and the prequel to thi as well) i think you're a fabulous story and your plots are amazing. keep up the good work x
mexxdbest 2007-05-31 ch 32,	abusehi!!this was such a nice story. it was a touching one..atfirst i didnt like this same as through the words of gossip..truthfully i thought it was such a trash..like sarah was so always in trouble due to her hormones i feel like she was so addicted to * and i feel engrossed with the main character and same to chad! who was so immature in the first sequel and so was hard to understand whether he loved her...and I also didnt like the way there was lot of * and you even vividly described every bit of it. like it was even a necessity to describe the a french kiss but well i think i liked the last part...i read the story as positive as possible and i think i like how you made this story that even such a trash could have hope and to start renewing her life that as long as your living there's time to change and evrything...its so inspiring... i just really disliked the character whom i can say was all pathetic or rather sexualy aroused like everytime but then there were odd man out that michael williams and jordan walteers was nice...sadly there wasn''t any happy ending to them... i disgust natasha ...she so have no right to use Jordan pity hin ...she deserves every bit of revenge!!she the **!pity jordan! anyway really thanx for the story... ps. wouldn't it be nice if the girls name was indicated??haha!!
unidentified elephant crap 2007-05-21 ch 31,	abuseYES. I love the ending. I did NOT expect Jordan, and SCOTT of all the people. I LOVE SCOTT. I WANT HIS BABIES
Kohlomere 2007-05-17 ch 2,	abuseWait a second...blue collar means like custodian/janitor/sanitation engineer...so how about changing that to white collar? I never imagined Sarah would go into the business of thievery. Good job, E.
anonymous 2007-04-09 ch 3, anon.	abusenice story. but just a small thing. at the end of this chapter, you wrote "a picture of him when he was older" uh, don't you mean when he was younger?
Celestial Destiny 2007-03-03 ch 32,	abuseVery nice.
kat6528 2004-09-19 ch 32,	abuseOkay I am so srry for never reviewing anymore. I finally have a chance for myself. Being a freshman sux. Anyway back 2 my review. That was GREAT! I luv the ending! She's wit chad and they have a baby. it's so sweet. now im being all girlie. well i must read the other stuff. but CONGRATS on finishing this story!!
Icyglaze 2004-09-06 ch 32,	abuseI received an e-mail awhile ago about the last chapter and the epilogue being posted, but I lost interest in the story. I finally read both chapters today. Usually in a story, your readers should feel strongly about a certain couple, but somewhere along the line, I lost interest in all your characters. The plot seems very fuzzy. The argument with Adam, I thought it would just be a small thing, since the problem was so small and they appeared to be such good friends. I feel that in your writing, events seem to happen out of nowhere, there's no build up to anything, it just happens. I hated the protagonist. I can't tell you how to change that, but I'm just letting you know. The "intense" ending you were looking for didn't really happen. I felt no emotion other than disappointment while reading the last 2 chapters. Actually, reading this whole sequel was really hard for me because starting with the whole "Through The Words Of Gossip" is her book seemed a bit cheesy. Anyways, I guess that's it. I hope you'll spend some more time reading other stories, and reading your own stories from a different perspective and edit them before posting your new story.
Estelle Stafford 2004-09-02 ch 32,	abuseYes that is an ending, a verry good one.
Skumouse 2004-09-02 ch 32, anon.	abuseWoah! This was such an amazing story!! I'm glad she ended up with Chad, she did always love him so they deserved to finally end up together. I loved how Scott was!! He was very confusing and formal! I loved this story so much, I'm sad it's over!
CrystalDusk 2004-09-02 ch 32,	abuseommagawd im SO glad you wrote that! now it's a real ending! cool~! so sorry bout that weird weird short review i sent! i was gonna start a new line cept i accidentally pressed tab before that so it like sent the review before i could put anything in! =O she DID end up with chad...right? ~blink~ anyways...like i said i like this ending much better! so glad you decided to put it in. ^^
Coral Chimera 2004-09-01 ch 32,	abuseSo it was Chad. Interesting style of ending this, though switching back and forth from "four years ago" to "four years later" was a little weird in my opinion. After all they had been through, after all those years..I believe it was just about time for them to get together. To have her end up in another man's arms because she had accidentally got herself pregnant might have seemed absurd because the feelings you had mounted had really convinced me that they were somehow meant to be together. So Chad made a good father? That's a nice fact to digest. Given the examples you laid out, I must say that the second fiction was indeed deeper and more intense. And that I liked. Indeed her past did mould Sarah into what she ended up to be, and it's funny how Chad remained nearby all this time. Scott's dialogue amused me the very time I read it. Kinda odd but oh well, I guess I tend to stutter and fumble in front of unfamiliar audiences too. Overall, as I've always said, this fiction did not fall short of my expectations. Refuse to believe this if you choose to, but I personally feel that your writing skills have improved, particularly towards the end of TEOT. You've adopted a more mature style and whole approach, that impresses me so. As for the new fiction..interesting how you introduced it. "Please read it! I hear it is very good." Well..we'll see? Teehee. I bet it'll be another classic. Rest assured, you've done well. With both TEOT and TTWOG. p/s: Oh do drop by my page and read my works? It's been a while since I received your..erm..patronage?

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