lol! what a funny poem...very, i dont know, cute. i liked. the backwards up i found very intriguing *hehe* great work sweetie, kudos.

Cool format. New styles of poetry are always interesting. It really helps convey the feeling of amusement park rides. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

interesting poem, i liked it. good job.

Lol, this is funny! Odd ya, but kinda cute in it;s way, good job, lol. Love, Mia

Interesting format...very reminiscent of an amusement park ride, indeed.
lyv

Oh my! I don't know why but this seems so cute! Good job, and next time take me to the amusement park with you!

Excellent work and an fresh form.
Heart of the Sword

This is strange.
Although I certainly get the imagery behind the whole thing, its strange.
Maybe BECAUSE I get the imagery behind the whole thing is what makes it strange.
To me anyway!
Spawny

It's a cute childhood memory. Aw _

This is a definitely interesting poem. This reminds me of "ee cummings'" style of poetry. His poems are awesome and being a legendary poet, it is not easy to be close to his style. At the same time, this is your style and never let anyone say any different. Great job, Please keep on writing Seras Nova.

Hey sweetie! I really like this poem. Your new style is awesome! Love always,
Arashi

guess who! double meaning nice and how sentimental it is. my first review, dont laugh!