|Reviews for Salt and Pepper Shaker|
| Dirty Wallpaper 2/18/04 . chapter 1
lol! what a funny poem...very, i dont know, cute. i liked. the backwards up i found very intriguing *hehe* great work sweetie, kudos.
| cosmo-queen 1/13/04 . chapter 1
Cool format. New styles of poetry are always interesting. It really helps convey the feeling of amusement park rides. Keep writing :)
| Aleonic Relic 1/10/04 . chapter 1
interesting poem, i liked it. good job.
| Aimee Raven 1/6/04 . chapter 1
Lol, this is funny! Odd ya, but kinda cute in it;s way, good job, lol. Love, Mia
| godawful teen-angst poetry 1/4/04 . chapter 1
Interesting format...very reminiscent of an amusement park ride, indeed.
| Deadwind 1/4/04 . chapter 1
Oh my! I don't know why but this seems so cute! Good job, and next time take me to the amusement park with you!
| Keep it 100 1/3/04 . chapter 1
Excellent work and an fresh form.
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| SpawnMeister666 1/3/04 . chapter 1
This is strange.
Although I certainly get the imagery behind the whole thing, its strange.
Maybe BECAUSE I get the imagery behind the whole thing is what makes it strange.
To me anyway!
| One With Moonlight 1/3/04 . chapter 1
It's a cute childhood memory. Aw _
| Anthony Draconius 1/2/04 . chapter 1
This is a definitely interesting poem. This reminds me of "ee cummings'" style of poetry. His poems are awesome and being a legendary poet, it is not easy to be close to his style. At the same time, this is your style and never let anyone say any different. Great job, Please keep on writing Seras Nova.
| moment2moment 1/1/04 . chapter 1
Hey sweetie! I really like this poem. Your new style is awesome! Love always,
| nefaria18 1/1/04 . chapter 1
guess who! double meaning nice and how sentimental it is. my first review, dont laugh!