Another wonderful poem. It's people like you that made me start writing poetry. I have to admit. You are one of the best poets who's works I've read in quite a long time. Every one of your poems has been breathtaking. There's not just one that stands out. They're all outstanding, and no amount of "Yay, good job." can do justice. I hope someday to amass the talent you have.

whoa. nothing but that. whoa.

Oustanding piece of work! Beautifully done! You are very talented and it shows. Thank you for your kind reviews.
Needa S.

forget the favorite story, an additon to my favorite author's list! Just beautiful lines, one upon the other. I usually am struck by a stanza or two but never line upon line. Very pretty poem here too!

I love the way this flows, and the rhyming is great.

Wonderful, wonderful poem...I like the way it flows, and the occasional break in a more regular meter scheme that emphasizes imagery (the line "Dancing in the heart of a fire's flare" is a prime example) -- very nice!

This is really good. I enjoyed reading it.

a very well written piece. it flows smoothly adn the rhyme scheme doesn't seem forced. over all very well done.

This one flowed so well...truly awesome piece of work. Great rhyming, and really great imagery.
These are a few lines that really had an impact on me:
*Sewing new patches to destiny's quilt*
*Folding her tapestries of forgotten lands*
*dancing in the heart of a fire's flare*
Truly awesome lines. Never stop writing!!

This is amazing. I love your work. I cant get enough of it. I told a friend about it too and they love it as well!

Beautiful! i can picture the Weaver too...*picturing* oo ahh...i love the flow and the use of words.
I also see your an Enya fan? woo!! Enya ever and always!

That was one stunning poem! Rhythm and meter were close to perfect and the theme was captivating.
Good work.

*melts* so lovely, so . . . hypnotical. your poetry never fails to entrance me, somehow; it's always so magical. and i love magical poetry in general, it's my favorite kind, but no one writes it like you do. your talent is so unique. it just stuns me. :) this poem is gorgeous. great use of structure and repetition throughout, simply amazing imagery. the two bits that are sticking with me here are: "a barely perceptible silhouette," and "sewing new patches to destiny's quilt." breathtaking piece, i love it. kudos!

This was great. The rhyming scheme didn't sound forced at all and it just kind of weaved in with the poem (No pun intended). Great job on this.
~Lidless Eye

awesome poem. Its truly beautiful.