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| cosmo-queen 2004-01-04 ch 1, | abuseGood poem, I liked the imagery and metaphors in this. And the abrupt ending was a twist. Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Siberia1 2004-01-03 ch 1, | abuse*claps hands* Wow, the imagery here almost comes alive! Every verse is so rich and vivid. I admire your command of the vernacular. You're a truly talented writer. Two thumbs up! b^_^d Would you consider reading "The Sun Dancer"? I'd like to hear from you. |
| kleptongal 2004-01-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is full of movement, with a certain musicality in the ongoing repetition of ideas. Well done! |