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| Stokd 2004-11-23 ch 1,  | abuseHaha! I get it, good work :p This is Ricky. In case I didn't make things right before, sorry for getting all crotchy and such when ** went down way back when with Ryan. |
| glitterjewele 2004-01-25 ch 1, | abusethis is VERY good. the first two stanzas and the second to last one, especially ~ classic lieschen, t'was great. :) "bottles sparkled in the dim light" ~ awesome line, very vivid. billows of steam out the door shouts of a fight on the grass nothing made me move from your arms that's my favorite stanza, it feels timeless. nice piece, kudos. :) |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 2004-01-03 ch 1, | abuseI don't get the joke, but I love your style--great job on this! ~lyv |
| Lidless Eye 2004-01-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was pretty nice. I'm not from Saskatchewan, though, so I guess I didn't get the joke. =) Good work, though... Happy New Year, too. ~Lidless Eye |
| The Black Rider 2004-01-02 ch 1, | abuseWell, I didn't get the joke but I'm Caucasian, so that might explain it. I still liked the poem, though. Oh, and don't worry. I'm not going to stop writing. I just need some time to improve my craft. But you are really very sweet to say I'm the best writer on the site. That did brighten my day quite a bit. Thank you. |