hey i m glad u wrote sumthing on dis ...we jus dun realize how bad things r for dem dat makes them tick off.

awe! that was so sweet and sad and brilliant!! By brilliant i mean the way it was written not the plot itself...the plot was sad. Anyway...that whole part where Nathan kissed her was so sweet and sad and horrible and spectacular!! ugh...I can't describe it but I'm sure you get what i mean. Great Job!! Off to read more of your stories! ~Marah (goody2sho)

I think if you expanded this story just a tad more, it'd be fantastic. A little more insight into the characters. But! Other than that, very touching story. And it's true, things like this happen too often...I mean, even just once is "too often"...ah, now you've gone and depressed me. =)

Very moving. It was well written as well. I have never been in a situation like that either, but it truly is sad, not only because people are killed, but because it wouldnt happen if people would keep thier comments and "jokes" to themselves. I think that it was a good idea to write something like this.
Sabi2~

wow...intense... i like intense though...
LV

Oh, that is so sad but very well written. Nice job.

This was really good... very powerful and gets the point across. And there is definite emotion in it. Keep writing!

Aw, poor Alex...

NOW IVE READ ALL UR WORK, WOW THIS WAS SO GOOD, AND SO SAD, YOU NEED TO WRITE A BOOK. YOUR WRITING IS THE BEST I HAVE READ IN A LONG TIME, U REMIND ME OF SANDRA BROWN, U TO SHOULD BE ON THE BESTSELLER LIST, YOUR WORK IS AWESOME, AND THAT ** THAT REVIEWED BELIEVE IN ME, SHE WAS HIGH, SHE MUST BE ON DRUGS TO SAY SUCH A THING ABOUT AN AWESOME STORY, I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE OF UR WORK
:)

Oh, how sad. Sweet without being sappy. Alexandra was nice without being a saint, still real. It's scary to think that there's a Michael out there somewhere just waiting and someone as dumb as Cory (sorry!) who's gonna set it off. If you wanted to go somewhere else with this you could write a short story on what Cory went through afterwards.
By the way, thanks for reviewing my story!

WOW, this is deep and so true, I didnt know you wrote this, great job, so much emotion. I dont knopw what to say, this was just put together so well, i loved it, perfect writing.
thanks
isabelle

Okay, I'm crying...
Thank you for one of the most touching stories I have ever read.

AW!! That was so sad! Wow, I never thought something like that could happen. Ive read about that kind of stuff, but I never thought that type of thing could happen to ME. Now this story makes me wonder. Great, I loved the detail! Youre a wonderful writer, keep up the good work!

Touching

omg i'm tearing up. thats so so sad.