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| Premeditated Chaos 2004-01-02 ch 1,  | abuseMy, and I thought my stories were short. Wonderful piece of work though, length has no effect on quality. I don't think it would work as well as it does if it were longer. You've captured the emotion and the moment quite well - I like the licking the blood off the blade, that really leads you to imagine what kind of sick person he really is. Great job ^_^ ~PMC |