This is really good. The last line doesn't really fit the rhyme scheme of the poem though. But the rest of it is really great. Keep writing!

I liked the whole concept in this poem about fantasy and feeling love within dreams. I think this poem is very expressive with that. I found myself relating to that topic. I think your way with words is really good, and your word choices nicely made. However, the only line that kind of confused me was the last one. I was really relating to the whole poem and then I read the last line and finding myself thinking "huh?" I don't know that may just be me, and it probably has some secret meaning for you. But, overall I think this is a nicely expressed poem. My favorite lines were: "Though your touch never felt,/And your kisses never tasted,/My dreams fill me up" I thought those were very relatable. Good Job.