I really like this poem. It seemed to really speak to me. I love the whole idea of longing and wanting this person's love, but not being able to have it, and then to realize that it's not meant to be and you find peace, yet you still feel lonely within yourself. I thought this expressed that nicely. My favorite lines were: "Though deepest desires,/Focus on your sweet touch./I could not bear the fires/Of your love burning out so much." Those were the lines I thought were the best. I also really liked the rhyme scheme. It's very refreshing to read a poem with a strong rhyme scheme and it's hard to find one sometimes, but your created a strong one. Very nicely done!