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| Maxegirl1313 2008-05-03 ch 4,  | abuseWoah! i honestly didn't see that coming! UPDATE SOON! And are you dead? If not, than i 4-year writer block SHOULD be enough time;.. |
| MayaD 2008-04-06 ch 4, | abuseKAAH!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!/!!?!?!?!?!1?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? EH!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!!?!?!?!?!?! I mean... EH!? WAH?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!? I mean, I just... don't react well to... to uh... these uh... cliff hanger type things i mean... its like... WHAT!? |
| noriepie 2007-12-25 ch 4, | abusewhat what?? you HAVE to keep writing this story and yes, i know they are supposed to be in high school, but can you give an indication of what class. are they seniors? because for some reason i always think the characters are about 13 |
| fatso17 2007-11-24 ch 4, | abuseWTF?! that would mean that he went through puberty at an early age and did the deed when he was 12. *gape* .. seriously?! but nice writing. hope you update soon! |
| Another Lone Stranger 2007-02-10 ch 4, | abusehis son?!? well i love this story so far so update soon! sincerely, ALS |
| DisconnecteD 2005-09-03 ch 4, | abuseI really enjoyed this...the writing/storyline seems so different than some of your other works, that I really liked this. A LOT! I hope you continue this. It's really interesting and you really know how to create some cliffhangers and twists. |
| estoOh 2005-08-21 ch 4, | abuseaW...ur srzly HAVE to update! its been a year already...u left me hanging off my seat O.O Brandon has a son! |
| DuchessYappingDog 2005-07-18 ch 4, | abuseOh no, you're so evil. Just like that other story I read, More Than A Feeling. Once the other person finds out that the kid isn't their brother/sister, you guys stop writing! Yargh. Anyways, I hope you update soon(ish). |
| Charlotte Havok 2005-06-24 ch 4, | abusewhat?!! i really didn't saw that one coming!! update update update please i really like this story well, i also like a complicated friendship, keep the good work! |
| Accalia Aeryn 2005-06-21 ch 4, | abuseOh my god! You have to finish this, it's wonderful! I just about starting crying. I don't know what to say other then I'm speechless. |
| Ryan 2005-06-16 ch 4, anon. | abuseomg u have to continue i knoe u stopped writing this but its just so amazing ur stories are so good i feel like im actually there and it just so amazin |
| Disoriented Waste 2005-03-06 ch 4, | abuseI absolutely love how you are writting this story I mean it! HOwever I was wondering if your still writting because I would love to read more.. I really really really hope you'll about more chapter! |
| rock 'n' roll junkie 2005-02-24 ch 4, | abuseWhoa whoa whoa whoa...okay THAT'S a HUGE surprise. That's like extremely shocking! And the story just gets better. You're one my most favorite authors. You're such a good writer! Keep up the fantastic work! |
| windowbreak 2004-11-03 ch 4, | abusehey is this story over? please no! i wanna know what Hayley'll do. hehe this story is getting interesting please dont stop here! i really like it! |
| Isle of View 2004-09-19 ch 4, | abuseOh my gosh! The last sentence made me gape with shock. That was really unexpected...don't stop writing! This is really good. |