Harsh, very harsh. But very good also. Bravo.
Valerie

Wow. (yes i know im inarticulate!). That was...great. I can completely relate to the feeling of being worthless. You're such a good writer, please write more!

hmm. nice. i liked the flow, a few of your other poems seemed sort of contrived, but this one was...free?

When I feel worthless, this is exactly what I wish I could write! I like the short lines and how they go together. Parts of this could very well be one of those angsty songs "punk" bands write for their dads or whatever. I know the emotions and feelings conveyed through this all too well. It's written nicely.

The structure of the poem sounds like it is crying. Confessing its pain and missery and suffering through broken lines and rhymes.
But, it fills up its blank canvas with this sadness, or it erases a picture of sunshine with it.
Great job!

Hm... Wow... I can relate to this poem... I like it... Depressing, but very very good... ) Keep it up.