sweet story. it's fate brought them together.

omg i love this story!!
thanx so much for writing it!!
its so cute!

Teehee that was beautiful i love Jordan and Lizzie. I also love Mistle toe! Faboulous story. Keep Writing

Cute story, some parts maybe a little too cute and unrealistic though. I don't think the title really had to relate to anything, other than the very end when they finally kissed and got together. There were some chapters that didn't really add to your plot at all though, and could probably be omitted. I also think that Lizzie's attraction towards Jordan was a little shallow. How can you say you might be in love with someone when you have barely talked to them? Well I guess that just relates to a difference in opinions on love at first sight. Anyways. I also think that the whole ice skating falling in thing was unrealistic, in that Jordan didn't act like he cared that Lizzie got hurt at all until she was all better and stuff. If he was so concerned then why didn't he visit her in her room? It's not like it would have taken a lot of effort to do so. Also, I thought she was 19 in the very beginning?

Anyways, this is a sweet story. Cute. Actually it's been on my to-read list for a while. :)

-- Alyssa

adorable!

That was such a brilliant story! I'm so sad it's over, I loved reading about Jordan and Lizzie...
The characters are all so wonderful, it really is a great story, I don't think there was a single moment in the epilogue where I didn't have a huge grin on my face!
-AG :)

AW!
Super sweet story!
Sad it's over though.

Wow, I'm so glad that I found this story, it's absolutely wonderful and just the kind I wanted to read. I was completely bored out of my mind and so tired of reading cliches that I gave up finding a good fic and when I came across this one I'm happy that it didn't let me down. Although the review is late, you know what they say, better late then never. Also thanks for not adding all the cliched romance, I trully loved this story and I hope that there'll be more like these on the way from you.
Tecna ;)

great story! what i love about this is the family bond between sisters and how you captured how she felt

cliche but amazing story!
xx

"and why he didn't want to go skating with Elle."- i think you mean "Lily" not "Elle"
haha. sorry about this like, years after you finished this story.
that just really bothered me.

wow...just wow. that is the most pationate out look on love I've ever seen!

aww this is so sweet... i love reading about the re-wedding jitters and the large family

Just to let you know, I LOVE THIS STORY!

Hi! Ok, so here's my story:

I was somewhat bored today; just hanging out in my room and having nothing more interesting to do except for watching some SpongeBob with my kid brother (yeah, that's how bored I was . . . I don't even like SpongeBob . . . his laugh annoys me . . .) N'ways, back to the subject here. Ok, so I decided that I would enjoy spending my time reading. See I'm somewhat of a book-worm, and seeing how I didn't have a book at hand (I know, shocking!! ^.^) I came here. And, coincedentally, I found your story!

I read it and here is what I thought about it:

OMG! I couldn't stop shrieking (with delight, of course)!! I know this story is pretty old and what-not, but I fell in love with it!! All it's characters (Lily in particular), it's settings, and it's plotline! I love it all! I even wanted to cry every once in a while, depending on what was going on, of course. See, I am a hopeless romantic and your story just made my day (or night, seeing how I just finished reading the entire thing! LOL! ^.^)!! I Loved it; so very adorible! This story will definately be one in my 'Favorites' List!!

Well, I'll stop my rambling now!! Take care, and keep stories as sweet and adrible coming!! Do it for all us hopeless romantics!! LOL! Well, take care! Ciao!

~LunaBela