| Reviews for Open Shadow |
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Melissa Lea Night 2/14/04 . chapter 1i like the phrase open shadow and i like the main part "on a day you were unhappy..." i find it interesting that the person was unhappy during a sunny day, which most poems it seems has people saddened during gloom or darkness. "trying to fight darkness without touching it." this one is my fave line, i think it's verry fitting. |
Werecat99 1/27/04 . chapter 1I liked that. The connection with shadows and doors worked extremely well as a metaphor. Good work. And thanks for the review. |