   a lonely september 2006-06-24 . chapter 16i can pretty much only say 'holyshit' to this collection. because it's simply amazing. each word was .justright. (i didnt know the french one, but other than that...) each was beautifully written & makes me jealous. i can't even manage to write proper haikus, not to mention good ones. this is great. |
 White is a Sin 2005-12-10 . chapter 16to have a phobia about paranoia wouldn't that be bieng paranoid?
good |
| White is a Sin 2005-12-10 . chapter 15 good very poured into from heart or whatever seems like it was from the pure heart thingy |
| White is a Sin 2005-12-10 . chapter 14 nice |
| White is a Sin 2005-12-10 . chapter 13 weird |
| White is a Sin 2005-12-10 . chapter 12 funny but i don't get why this is K+ because kids wouldn't be able to understand it |
| White is a Sin 2005-12-10 . chapter 11 it feels as though you don't put your thoughts and willingly pour your heart into it...
but that's just my opinion...
good |
| White is a Sin 2005-12-10 . chapter 10 sounds like love or something...
good very good |
| White is a Sin 2005-12-10 . chapter 9 interseting first line very descriptive in a way it makes sense |
| White is a Sin 2005-12-10 . chapter 8 i found the title funny!
it was good |
| White is a Sin 2005-12-10 . chapter 7 feels as though you're saying that you can't express your feelings or someone can't
i find the only way to express my feelings is to write poems |
| White is a Sin 2005-12-10 . chapter 6 touching somehow |
| White is a Sin 2005-12-10 . chapter 5 huh...? i guess it was weird.
i'm learning japanese! |
| White is a Sin 2005-12-10 . chapter 4 good and i like the name?!?!?
staement not question, do you like the violin? |
| White is a Sin 2005-12-10 . chapter 3 wow, i just looked at how many reviews you got you must feel very priveledged (spelling?)
i liked it |
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