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| Cyberskiver 2004-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI love things like this: fragments of stories that could have all sorts of plots behind them. This was well written, and I'm curious, but somehow satisfied. I feel as if I could read this again as often as I liked and notice something new every time. Very good job. |
| midnights shadow 2004-01-19 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. Not quite sure I understand it, but liked it. Like eavesdropping-the posibilities are endless. |
| Lauren K 2004-01-08 ch 1, | abuseI like this...it was intriguing, listening to them speak without actually knowing what they meant, and I probably would have kept reading even if it was a lot longer. The writing style, I believe, is also very good. I liked the title, too, by the way. ~Kiara BTW-I actually feel bad about not finding something specific to question or critisize, but I really found nothing wrong with the writing. |
| Limyaael 2004-01-03 ch 1, | abuseInteresting story to contemplate, although I didn't always understand what was going on or what character was speaking. This was probably not helped by the format. Did you mean to put the dialogue all together into one paragraph? It might have been a deliberate sylistic choice, but it did make it hard to read. Will there be more explanation of what the Tarot archetypes are doing there, or is this a one-shot? -Limyaael. |