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Gentle. Edge. 2009-12-03 . chapter 1
This was really interesting. I like how you incorporated the details of Amy's life while also narrating what's happening during the present. (Did that make sense, LOL?) She and Luke seem like very interesting characters and I can't wait to read more about them :)
Reticence 2009-11-15 . chapter 10
aww, how bittersweet. loved it. ;)
sing gal 2009-10-20 . chapter 10
im speechless right now!
SapphireEyes16 2009-09-16 . chapter 10
luv this story!
esssjay 2009-08-04 . chapter 10
hey. thanks for the great read ! :) even though it was shorter than most stories that i read, i thought it was still quite good and it was definitely entertaining.
Alenor 2009-06-12 . chapter 10
nice story ~ Alenor
McShort 2009-02-08 . chapter 10
I don't what to say except I love this story. You are an amazing writer! gahh can't express how much I like this story so I'll end it right here
Incurable Adoration 2009-02-02 . chapter 2
I'm re-reading this story, and one thing I feel I should mention is that at the time of Woodstock, and for at least a few years afterward, the festival wasn't thought to be a hugely memorable event. It was just another music festival...though it did have some big, big names on the roster.

In case no reviewer before me said anything about that, I thought I'd leave this note.

I haven't heard any Baby Boomers who attended Woodstock say that they knew, at the time, it would be a big deal.

Anyway, the story is well-written, of course, and obviously, you devoted a lot of energy and focus to its completion. Good job. It's hard work, I know. = )
luxsandie 2008-10-29 . chapter 10
Wow. Updated in 2004. Do you still read these things?

Anyway, this was a great story. The actions and consequences were very believeable. You made them all great characters despite their short comings.

I only have one critique: everything felt so convenient. I'm not saying that the relationship between Luke and Amy hadn't been through enough, but that this story could've been longer. Or at least, some arguments seemed unatural because they were squeezed into such a small space. I don't know, there is just something between the confrontation between the sisters that made me frown and reread.

Other than that, awesome story you have hear. I especially loved how you linked the past to the present so seamlessly. Thumbs up.
anitsirK 2008-10-28 . chapter 10
Well written and I liked its brevity. :D Thanks for writing.
Genato 2008-05-21 . chapter 10
sweet fic. written very, very good. i liked the chapter best when the 2 sisters reconciled.
xPink Blossomsx 2008-02-11 . chapter 10
loved it
enigmatic.allure 2008-02-09 . chapter 10
amazing! one of the best story I've read.
Aynn 2008-01-26 . chapter 10
Great story! Thanks for the happy ending. I'm extremely selfish when it comes to loving main characters, so the whole thing with Sally and whatnot drove me insane. =) Hope you start writing again sometime!
Falter Affair 2008-01-22 . chapter 10
I cried, I really did. Beautiful story, you've got a gift, woman! xD
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