thats so good! (i know i told you like five minutes ago i was gonna read it, i must read fast lol) anyway you write really good werewolf stories...waiting for the next chapter!

great remake this is an awsome story cant wait for rest

I like the way this starts out so far, can't wait to read the next chapter!

Wow!
This looks really good so far! I like the name Derek, too! heehee
You have a good use of vocabulary, too! It's nice to have a good variety of words.
I like how you use a lot of conversation, too!
everything looks good I just hope you update soon! Keep going, definately!!
If you can, could you please r&r my new story, When Snow Falls in Vermont? Thanks!