   atreyu love 2007-08-07 . chapter 1haha. almost reminds me of Absolute boyfriend XD |
 schizzophrenic 2006-12-20 . chapter 10please continue to write this story... i really love it! |
 xoxTheAngelFromMyNightmarexox 2006-02-02 . chapter 10o, very interesting!! All this mystery surrounding Akira 0.o! Plus he sounds pretty hot, lol.Please update soon! |
 Krystal Sunshine 2005-12-29 . chapter 10It's great! But I realised the date. The last time you updated this story was September... LAST YEAR?! NO!! And now it's almost 2006! This is terrible! Please, Tenshi...
UPDATE! |
 MegumiReisui 2005-12-12 . chapter 10I love the story, please continue :D ^_^ |
 me 2005-11-25 . chapter 10 NO! I cant believe it!! Hurry!I NEED CH 11!! then 12then 13 then...it goes on and on...! |
| hi 2005-11-13 . chapter 10 Please continue writing this story is awsome, can't wait till what happens next |
 A Dark White Rose 2005-11-13 . chapter 10please please please update soon!
i wish u luck on your writing! |
 Sally-andersonn 2005-10-15 . chapter 6I like the whole marriage and caterpillar thing. It is very very original. |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-10-15 . chapter 3 It kind of twitches my nerves when Seiki seems to be the only one who cooks. |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-10-15 . chapter 2 It was funny! thw whole shock was confusing though the profile kinda did the thinking for me about who the character was, which was great. |
| Sally-andersonn 2005-10-15 . chapter 1 There are so big gaps in between the lines which make me scroll down a lot. Anyway, it was enjoyable, you have funky characters who have funkier colours (is it a manga thing?). The character profiles were great too. |
 KereiKitsune 2005-09-17 . chapter 10XD ah! I have theory's! Update soon! |
| Faye-san 2005-09-11 . chapter 10 Interesting...Who be looking for him? |
 Demonic Silver Rose 2005-08-30 . chapter 10Aw this story is so sweet and cute at the same time. I can't wait fo the next chapter!~ |
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