LMAO! I loved the one with the gold can. Hah well I like limericks, they're the only form of poetry I like (or rather it's the only form I find funny)
Anyway good job, that's all I have to say.

Lol, Well, here is my review for the whole series, good job! I've tried these myself, though purely for school, and you're better than me! Good job! _

"Grr...that's it! Minus four respect points!"
Very cute. The rhythm's a bit awkward in the last line, but it's *hillarious* nonetheless.
And true.
-Zell

[dies] You are a genius!

I think that this limerick could have had a better "punchline", or final line.
Sorry for the negative reviews, but I prefer not to lie. Hope I've helped in your writing...call it flames if you must, but we'll break outta here or bust.

Yay! I liked this limerick...though it took me a few re-reads to understand. Well done!

AArgh! You can NOT rhyme the first line with the last line...it's cheating!
Also, as a side note, I'd recommend calling your chapters something related to the limericks they contain.

I think that a better last line would have been "And returned home, carrying a ducky", which would have fit better with the theme of "winning" or "luck."
But, as with all my reviews, this is just opinion.

Actually, feign and Paine do rhyme. It's just game that doesn't rhyme with the other two...may I recommend .com for all of your rhyming needs?
Still, nice rhythm...except for the last line. 10 syllables is 3 more than the standard amount.

Again, nice rhythm, dodgy dodgy rhyming. You rhymed a name with a name...that's breaking all limerick rules. And "Erin" and Barren or Karen don't even rhyme properly.

Well...the rhythm's nice, but the rhyming is dodgy. Rhyming Vermont with Vermont is just not on...
And I have a collection of 40 limericks on Fictionpress. Many are dodgier than yours...no offense.

this one's my favorite by far! i love this one!

y'know this just isn't right! lol, but i like it!

she cut off her tail! ew!

heh. ducky. what a moron!