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| AkunamattataTM 2008-07-18 ch 25,  | abuseI really, really liked the story! xD =D |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-06-29 ch 25, | abuseOne word ; AWESOME |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-06-27 ch 25, | abuseThroughout the entire story, Jake and Kat didn't seem really close. They seemed a bit distant even though they were 'in love' until the end where they really showed their feelings. I think they were missing a real connection in the beginning but I loved their characters individually. I really liked all the drama you put into this because you had so much going on but you some how made it seem natural. It never went to me going "ok, there's too much crap and I'm getting a headache now". I also liked how you managed to make half this story funny and the other half dead-on, serious, crazy ** drama. In the end, I really liked your story. :) |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseIf I didn't read all your other stories then I would think this was really good but I think you really need some more variety in your writing. This was a good chapter though so it's not the story. I can't wait to read more though :) |
| morexforxme 2008-05-27 ch 25, anon. | abuseOkay, I absolutely lurve this fic! It's way, way, way good. I found myself wishing that it would be just a teensy-weensy bit shorter-- but otherwise, it's really good. Oh yeah, and GREAT last chap! |
| cue.dramatic.gasp. 2008-05-20 ch 25, | abuseWow. It was kind of a sudden ending - gotta love those! I loved it. (: Awesome! |
| PrincessNancy 2008-04-27 ch 25, | abuseIts' official! I LOVE JAKE.. Now, I want more... PLEase.. a sequel? With an insight to Jake's life and further deveopments in Jake/Kat relationshiop, pwease? |
| mirofreak 2008-04-13 ch 5, | abuseokay so im not very far in the story but so far i think it is pretty brilliant and i absolutely love your characters! can you please post pictures of what you imagined your characters to look like, if it is not too much of an effort. |
| mirofreak 2008-04-13 ch 3, | abuse is that what his eye is suppose to look like? |
| Colie Rae 2008-04-03 ch 25, | abuseFirst I must say I loved the story and I loved the format in which you wrote it, it gave so much insight and yet it was never boring. I must admit though, as I read it all in one sitting, it was a bit depressing. I mean, it was a serious self pity party and bad things just kept piling on but you showed the POV so well. At one point I was furious with her mother and then I stopped and thought about it and realized that that shows true skill for you. I must say, I wish you would have given us a bit more before ending this. I did love the last little conversation bit but I mean, she had a breakdown and then she was fine and end of story! It just seemed a bit abrupt. I realize that you did not want it to end with her life suddenly perfect and I can appreciate that but I would have liked a bit more stabily or some more about Jake as you have me intrigued. Good work overall though. I love your writing style in this piece. |
| moneymakestheworldgoround 2008-03-27 ch 25, | abuse:) i enjoyed this. kinda short, but funny. |
| dontneedyou 2008-03-13 ch 25, | abuseI love this story. I read it all in one shot. I stayed up until 3 am reading it! |
| MackayFire 2008-03-07 ch 25, | abuseGreat story! I have to say I hate her mother but I love Jake so badly. I liked the way you could make Kat so whiney and self-pitying yet likable at the same time. |
| xxx Queen Of Slayers xxx 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuse17, my fave age! Ok, I'll just read the story now... |
| Vidavril 2008-02-10 ch 25, | abusethe best story I've ever read. Thanks! |