Naw cute cute cute.

I'm really not sure what else I can say about this! It's totally adorable!

:D

This story was great, very creative!

Adorable! :p

I'm grinning sucha cheesy grin right now I really don't know what to say but ...aw... =D

haha love it!

Aww. Just aww.

It was CuTe!:)

Really cute. :) I enjoyed it a lot.

Oh my gosh.. this has to be the best romantic one-shot I've ever read. It's cute and the characters are so realistic. I love how you tied those two together so quickly and so wonderfully. Ahh. Lovely.

From this life into the next..
~ Much love, Bleached Roses

aww...thats so sweet..
well...kinda

but allergies suck, you know...

tennis is cool...I used to play..until I found field hockey..

haha..common asian last name...soo true...except mine..
people usually start asking me if I really am asian...

great writer you...

Yay! I really, really, really love it. So cute!

Linden is my name! That's so weird, ps. I've never actually come upon anything with my name in it. Ever. So, thanks! It was cool.

Good story, too.

Linden.

"I’ll never forget they’re playing tactics." 'they're should be 'their'.

Short and sweet and a nice quick read. Pretty good overall. It is hard to make one-chapter stories with good, likeable characters but you've managed to pull it off.

lol that was really good for a short story!

Very cute story. It's usually hard to make one chapter stories connect well, but you did it just fine. Of course, them knowing each other a bit before helped. Good job!