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| RedRose42 2007-06-19 ch 13,  | abuseThis is a really cool story! I must say, it isn't what I expected, but ten times better! This is a very well-written story, and I hope you update soon! Kepp up the good work!! |
| Alenor 2006-12-17 ch 13, | abuseheya, this is a great story. i really hope that there's more, cya later ~ Alenor. |
| Fairytale Gurl 2006-05-18 ch 13, | abuseoh i really like this! well written and funny! not very realistic but that's perfect cause it doens't have to be! and that's sort of what makes it so nice, like i can dream about being as lucky as holly although yes it's not that perfect it's still completely samazing to act! I LOVE DRAMA haha yea! update soon! |
| CallMeCute 2005-12-02 ch 13, | abuseaw, i like it |
| Sam 2005-11-27 ch 13, anon. | abuseOkay real review. Very nice. I really liked it. Its really funny! Update!! |
| Sam 2005-11-27 ch 9, anon. | abuseAgain, note on the song. It's called "I Say A Little Prayer" by Aretha Franklin. It was written in the 60s not for the movie. Sorry, this is probably annoying. I'll stop. Probably. |
| Sam 2005-11-27 ch 3, anon. | abuseReally very good. Normally I wouldn't review untill I finished reading all that you've written so far, but I feel the need to say that Guy Sebastian (?) didn't write "What A Wonderful World" Louis Armstrong did. Okay, proper review later. |
| iglooey 2005-05-16 ch 13, | abuseWow, awesome story. The realism you protray the whole movie scene thing is amazing. I love your characters' personalitites and how flowy (is that a word?) your story is. I enjoy your humorous remarks too. Try to give a little more descriptions of Holly. Maybe you already described her in earlier chapters, but I can't remember how she looks like. Other than that, amazing job and PLEASE UPDATE SOON. |
| Crazy Wynona 2005-04-09 ch 13, | abuseOMHGOSH! This is fab! |
| ItalianQT 2005-02-19 ch 13, | abuseInteresting story so far... Holly needs to get Noah to talk to her! Update soon! : ) |
| arachibutyrophobia 2005-01-09 ch 13, | abuseThis is such an amazing story, I'm surprised it didnt get like hundreds of reviews! Its absolutely hilarious, and it makes me glad i'm not in acting. I hope that there will be more character interaction later on with the other actors and actresses. PLease update ASAP! |
| anne1822 2005-01-05 ch 13, | abuseI realy like your story line so far, I hope that you update soon. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next. |
| Harajuku Girl 2004-10-29 ch 13, | abuseIs your name Esther by any chance? Because your character's name Holly and her Chinese name Mei Li are my friends last name and Chinese name respectively. And she's Eurasian as well. Just wondering... |
| FireBringer 2004-09-03 ch 13, | abuseInteresting |
| lozzi1403 2004-08-23 ch 13, | abusereally good story. feel kinda sorry for holly coz she doesnt really know that much but really good!! catch ~lauren~ |