I like the way this started, but then it kind of went downhill from there. I absolutely LOVE the Heaven series. BY FAR the best V.C. had ever written. This was nicely written. -Ami

that's so sad, i hope you didn't experience that. the repition is particularly effective in this piece

that so beautiful and sad... aww the poor kid...

Now, I don't cry...but that brought me close to tears. That was poem was amazing. On to my favorite list it goes.

That's incredibly sad, but beautifully written. I liked it a lot. Keep it up

There's so much depth in your poetry, you capture the emotion so well. Sound's useless but I hope this never happened to you. I really like this poem, brought me close to tears. Thanks for sharing.

OMG this is just like my life! This is going straight to my favorites and so are you! Thank you so much for sharing it!
*K $ey*

I am definately adding this to my favorites. Wonderful writing. So sad.