Sad topic. Good poem.

I love your war poems! Especially this one.

This is a beautiful poem, and a little sad, too. The horrors of war...
Great work! Keep on writing!

THis is a very nice poem.

Short, simple and meaningful. It really annoyed me last Remembrance Day, when, in the minute of silence, people were talking and giggling under their breath. Grr. So disrespectful. Anyway, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

Awesome! It's short but sweet, I love to read poems about war, yours was really good.

did indeed like it keep writing you have a real talent

Remember to capitalize the first word of every line. Also, 'In the fields that¡¦s were they lay those people who we remember today' should be 'In the fields (that's they lay), those people we do remember today'.
The poem was inspirational, but the ryhming seemed a little forced. The second and third lines are the ones you should shoot for; those were the best of the poem.