Wow, this is wonderful. I really hope you update soon. This is great, and I hope to read more soon.

Aww, this is amazing! You are an amazing writer. The detail is soo detailed..lol, must read more!

Everyone's got a past. This sort of reminds me of the movie, Tokyo Godfathers, where all the character's deepest secrets slowly unravel over time.

This is just getting darker and darker. Angel's past is just as bad as her present.

This chapter was very moving...especially the last part. I had a hard reading all the way through it.

This chapter gives your story a lot of heart. I don't know if there's going to be an innocent romance between the two kids, but that kind of speculation makes for great writing as it allows the reader to make assumptions.

Oh, and I think I know what the painting is...

This is very gritty. And Angel's character is very well thought-out and written.

This is a great first chapter that introduces two very unique characters. It's very "outside the box" compared to a lot of the other stories on this site.

Great story...you really had me tied in. More to come, i hope? ~Mariah

i'm impressed with your writing, i can picture things so well in my head when youre the author

This story owns. I don't know what it is that makes me like it so much - you must add more soon. Keep writing - I want to know what happens with Angel and Nick.

this is... interesting. in an ironic sorta way.. i'm really looking forward to how this story will go...

Aww, Danny better get his ** out of the wheel chair soon. That's weird that he just sort of...gave up. Pathetic, too. I hope you'll be adding more to this story soon! Keep writing!

I really liked this. It was filled wiht lots and lots of feeling. I hope that this is the end...if it wasn't supposed to be, make it end there, becasue the ending is just so perplexing. Great job!

I think that you're a great writer. The emotions were conveyed perfectly, and although it could use a little bit more descriptions, it was just fantastic.
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I hope to see more of this soon!
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x3 -W