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| Amaranth of Grey 2005-04-05 ch 1,  | abuseIs this a political statement? Whether or not it is- aren't we all shattered by the subject? I wish I didn't have family in Iraq |
| Chronus 2005-01-31 ch 1, | abuseI don't know why I didn't review this a long time ago, but here goes: Excellent, centered, and poignant. Your style of poetry challenges the reader, your words attack the reader and the very heart of the matter. My only quam comes with the last stanza. The word "continue" doesn't seem to quite work. Why not use 'charge' again, or something with less syllables. |
| Fallenangel666 2004-11-19 ch 1, | abuseIts awesome...im doing a poetry project 4 english..if i give you credit can i use your poem? Lexington |
| scapegrace 2004-02-01 ch 1, | abuseThoughts on The War on Iraq?? Great poem, dood. And also, I want to carry Maynard's children. GO TOOL! (And APC) Linkin' Park does suck. You rule, dood! |
| Soul Rebel 2004-01-24 ch 1, | abuseGreat writing! I really like it. Hope to read more of yer stuff soon, too. Specially like the ending. |
| water sprite 2004-01-17 ch 1, | abuseI really like how you're themes and topics are open for so much discussion a sign of a good writer, I'd have to agree with you that war can be pointless sometimes, but there is so much more to say. Keep writing though, I'd like to see what you come up with next. |
| AnnaSun 2004-01-07 ch 1, | abuseHi, This is very good. Please read and review my poetry sometime. Thanks for sharing :) |
| Pont 2004-01-05 ch 1, | abuseOh, good. You're very good at matching the phrases. No extra advice here (whoa, did I just say I don't have any advice?). Keep up the great work! Pont |