This was a nice story! I loved reading it and I thought it was pretty. I liked Pari'lin especially and I want to know if he really fell in love with Neptune. I agree with my sister that you should write some stories about him. Anyway, bye now!

Hi! I only got to the second paragraph because I have to shut down my laptop. Your story sounds very interesting and I am going to continue reading it. I am Princess Chloe"s sister and I want some people to review for me 'cause this is my first time writing and I need different opinions. Please review for me!! Thanks.

That was an adorable ending. I loved it so much.
And of course, I liked how the Sha'la and Shu'lin have to save face, because they have to assure their people that humans have never seen them to make sure they feel safe. I loved Tan'rin'la espcially. She was so cute.
I can imagine how Pari'lin's real parents would feel bitter. But, they made the choice and they paid for it.
Oh, and Serp'dol reminds me of a dragon, which made me think about how dragon stories may have been made.!
I would love to be a Flyer.
Anyway, this was a very, very cute story and I enjoyed reading it so much (I'm just sorry it took me so long!). You must get more stuff like this up. Maybe you could have a set of short stories about Pari-lin.
Anyhoo, I'm off for now! Thanks a lot for finishing! ~Chloe

Oh, that is so sad! But you're right, things don't always turn out as they plan. It's a good story, though. What makes the plot line so far different from similar ones is that the parents couldn't have any more children. This story is really cute and original, and I enjoy reading it. And thanks so much for reading Guardian, and I'm glad you persevered since it's so long ^_^. I'll try to update as soon as I can! ~Chloe

Oh, this is so cute! It drew me in and had me hanging on every word. It's interesting to think that the stories we tell may be true in other worlds. I'm interested in the queen's story too. This is a very original idea. Write more! ~Chloe