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| fatbird33 2008-08-18 ch 1,  | abusethis is super sad. but it is well written |
| Advent Delirium 2004-01-04 ch 1, | abuseDeath sucks big time. This is a fitting ode for your friend. Especially loved the "My heart is frozen with a frost" line. |
| 1941 2004-01-04 ch 1, | abuseThat is really heart wrenching and touching. Some of the wording sounds a little forced like you weren't sure what to put (mainly the first stanza). I thought it was well written and sweet. |
| Melui 2004-01-04 ch 1, | abuseit touches a string in ones heart when reading this. good job. i'm sure your friend would be proud. |