very complex and creative. i like the selection of words- they go together to create a very strong image

This is very interestingly written, it is almost like a rhyme that you would say, but it manages to be beautiful all the same. It really sticks out from most poems that you read. Great job and keep up the good work!

Very intriguing. I'll have to read this "Tyburns" for it to make a bit more sense, though. ^_^ Nice write!

A great tyburn. Through a clever choice of words, you have created a very intriguing and meaningful piece. I must try writing a tyburn one of these days. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

YAY! A Tyburn. They're fun to write. Good work, Mime!
Very mysterious. I love it.

Very mysterious tone to it, I just love the forbidding mood of it!

Nice work. This does present a quite mysterious image.

Hm, quite interesting write. Liked.

Lol, another one... Very good work! Mysterious. I got the same image as Les Yeux Violets.

Great word choice. Yes, it does seem Tyburns are becoming increasingly popular.

Haha, yay for Tyburns--by Valentine's, the entire site will be writing them. ^^ This is cool--I've got this image of one of those neatly-dressed, pale and quiet shy adolescent boy who is ever-so polite and reserved in public...but you never quite know what's going on inside his head...
~lyv

nice, i like this. quite mysterious and well written. yeah, i read theirs also, but didn't have the time to write a tyburn yet. i'll get around to it sooner or later. great job on this. keep writing!