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| DragonsEclipse 2004-01-05 ch 1,  | abuseThis is written well. Good job! ^__^ I like the idea of flames being harmonious dancers. |
| Jess Angel 2004-01-04 ch 1, | abuseVery nice imagery. Adds a real powerful punches to the piece. Fire and dancing are such a cool subjects to write about, no? - Writing rocks! So write on! - Jess 0:o) |