This is lovely. Even with no knowledge of the mythology you referr to, I don't feel lost; the characters speak for themselves. Thank you for the read!

Also know as why Andie doesn't get invited to tea parties...
I love this story. It gives me a good look at what Andromeda and Sarah are like, and anything that I can learn about Ellara, I like.
Besides that, it's just so beautiful.

The symbolism is perfect, the style with the perfect measure of description and action. And very striking, the what-could-have-beens. The characterization is ideal, and the under-running current of their history (histories?) and the references to it (them?) are fabulous.

Descriptions vivid and beautiful. The additions and revisions improve the piece, I think — I like them! :) Poor Sarah.
Boo on Andromeda. *throws a heavy, metal, old-fashioned alarm clock at her*
~Swinging from the chandeliers~

Wonderfully engaging. The characterizations are dead-on (of course), and displayed so wonderfully. Andromeda is evil incarnate, and Sarah is darling. Strength beneath silk, eh? Great story, excellent and polished storytelling. Fantastic.