So depressing...Likey likey! XD
Well-written, well-composed, older works, but still beautiful. ^^
~ Kit ~

I LOVE IT. "hiding, crying in her ashes": great imagery. You are super-cool, and I love the overall poem. By the way, I also enjoyed your other poem entitled "Terra's Voices." Thank you for the un-triteness!

Extraordinary. The title has just enough brutality in it to contrast the caring and comforting in the poem. Is this a metaphor? Killer metaphor if it is. Stylish.

Well that's depressing --wipes tears-- ='( but a very well done with the writing and the idea for Cinderella.
*Jenna*

hehe, that's ok that you also made a Cinderella poem. As long as we dont have like more than 2 lines similiar.. XX This was nice. Very vivid. I like :)
AAH... THERE'S BOOKS ON NECROPHILIA?! OH MY ** GOD! *drol* Must.. check... it...out...must...ravish...corpse...
hehehe, I know what you mean when you say dolls -get- you... I have a doll fetish as well, if you consider yours a fetish. I've listed that in my bio, as well as my other Lust Fetish Obsessions that take over my mind and writing...
what does glomp mean again? lol, I don't remember. I have a lot of friends who are anime fans but amazingly, I forgot..
molest your boyfriend, eh? hehe. What else are they for? =P That's the purpose of mine. To seduce and molest. Heh, yes, seduction is almost as sweet as blood... hmm, that gives me a poem idea.
Tokiko

Wow.. brilliant. I love it. 'once upon a time/too many times'. Great lines...

Wonderful! I really enjoyed this poem! =) I really did... It's nice to read a poem that keeps you interested... Maybe that's because I like gloomy, morbid stuff, but I liked it just the same! =)
Cinder--oops!
Sterces