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| Cardinal Chuck 2004-03-21 ch 1,   | I really like this. I enjoy twists and this is one I definitly didn't see coming. I do think that it went kind of fast though. And I didn't really get until he ran to his mom that he was that young. I know Sherry said "but we're much to young" but that is very over lookable and it should be stated more clearly if you want the reader to know. If you don't then you did a great job. Anywho, I really like this and your writing is fantastic. Thank you for not wasting my time. |
| ConfectusPapilio 2004-01-28 ch 1, | Whoazas... Nice twist at the end, one of the shocking ends. Might have gone into a bit fast, but, very interesting...well worth my time. |
| TheSilentO 2004-01-27 ch 1, | You definitely have a talent for writing. It's quite inspiring really, this story just leaves me yearning for more. |
| pewpewpera fah wef 2004-01-26 ch 1, | *laughs* oh, how creepy. I love short little stories like this. This one is great. Hehehe, make the character go crazy, a fun past time. AH, keep it up ^_^ ~Midnight Predator~ |
| M. Turnbull 2004-01-10 ch 1, | I thought it was great Jenn! I don't really get the symbolism of the yellow ribbons and I've forgotten the legend of unicorns. But I like it. You have a flair for romance stories. Keep up the good work! Later! |
| Jessie 2004-01-10 ch 1, | this one was mysterious but also good i like the twist you put to it, you should really think about getting them published! |
| funkyblueeyes 2004-01-10 ch 1, | I like this one. You should continue it. |
| Treasure 2004-01-06 ch 1, | Wow... that was interesting... kinda wierd... but good... |