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| cosmo-queen 2004-01-05 ch 1,   | Good poem, I liked this. You used some nice imagery, especially in the second last stanza, which I particularly liked. So often when I hear the wind from the sea, it seems like the ghosts of those lost at sea are calling out. Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| amethystdawn 2004-01-05 ch 1, | It's *eyes sparkle* bee-oo-ti-ful! It's so good! It's filled with emotions, I feel all jumbled up. Anyway, it's wonderful. You're a great poet. Talent is obvious in you. I wanna put this in my favorites. ^_^ |
| aode 2004-01-05 ch 1, | This is a great poem. Nice use of words, and I like the way you use your details. Good work, and keep writing. |