|Reviews for in the making|
| Story-Teller's Aide 3/13/04 . chapter 1
i love the whole idea of the poem, and it does manage to flow. most of the wording seems right but you might want to read over it and change a few bits here and there.
| KaseyLovesNoOne 1/6/04 . chapter 1
Good job. It proves alot of points and I find it pretty deep. Keep it up!