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| babygxpress 2004-12-23 ch 1,   | she probably liked the russian doll comparison to human personality. I do too :P I can't see the main point or morale of this story though, it just left me... hanging. Perhaps you could work a nice little mini plot on how and why you're comparing russian dolls to your story/s characters from the beginning. PS: No offense. I just really enjoyed the russian doll comparison and didn't want to see it go to waste. I want to write about russian dolls too :~( |
| Kazuline 2004-01-05 ch 1, | i really like it you didnt write that much about janet but you made her a very convincing B*tch. nice metaphor by the way |
| LauratheCat 2004-01-05 ch 1, | Hay! ^_^ That was excellent! Great writing and everything! Russian dolls >_< hehehe ^_^ keep on writing oringal stuf!! (And never forget THE Yami. And THE Yuugi.) =^_^= ~*Laura*~ |