Wow. That poem was awesome. Especially the last few stanzas. Read your bio, since you reviewed one of my pieces a while ago. We seem to have a lot in common. Cassandra Clair? Wow. I cant believe I remember her... its been years since I followed HP fan ficiton like a feind. What website is still updating it? anyway, the penguin thing is cool, dude... penguins are cool. And in conclusion, the point Im trying to make is that I DONT LIKE SAURKRAUT! And the poem was fantastic. I love angst. lol... this was entertaining to write. hehe. Ill stop.

wow thats amazing. i think it'd be really cool as a song, i already kind of can hear a beat... sorry, the musician in me talkin, not the poet lol good job