|Reviews for On the Block|
| Aged Parent Peggotty Barkis 1/20/05 . chapter 1
I think this poem encapsulates what I sometimes feel like as a writer.
I can't think of any bad things to say.
I think by putting the words on separate lines makes the poem seem in slow motion and also seems like typing.
| Genine 12/31/04 . chapter 1
I like this, how the sentences make sense if you take them one at a time. I also like how you ended it: exactly what I feel. Nice stuff.
| Sammy- B 12/12/04 . chapter 1
thtas good, i like the ending
| JohnBarley 5/20/04 . chapter 1
Right on Sister!
| Kelsey Windsor 1/12/04 . chapter 1
ahhaz.. had a big smile on my face with this one )
| Medron Pryde 1/6/04 . chapter 1
LOL Ok, that one is just plain funny. I love it!