 Aged Parent Peggotty Barkis 2005-01-20 . chapter 1I think this poem encapsulates what I sometimes feel like as a writer.
I can't think of any bad things to say.
I think by putting the words on separate lines makes the poem seem in slow motion and also seems like typing. |
 Genine 2004-12-31 . chapter 1I like this, how the sentences make sense if you take them one at a time. I also like how you ended it: exactly what I feel. Nice stuff.
Genine** |
 Sammy- B 2004-12-12 . chapter 1thtas good, i like the ending |
 JohnBarley 2004-05-20 . chapter 1 Right on Sister! |
 Kelsey Windsor 2004-01-12 . chapter 1ahhaz.. had a big smile on my face with this one =) |
 Medron Pryde 2004-01-06 . chapter 1LOL Ok, that one is just plain funny. I love it! |