| Reviews for On the Block |
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Aged Parent Peggotty Barkis 1/20/05 . chapter 1I think this poem encapsulates what I sometimes feel like as a writer. I can't think of any bad things to say. I think by putting the words on separate lines makes the poem seem in slow motion and also seems like typing. |
Genine 12/31/04 . chapter 1I like this, how the sentences make sense if you take them one at a time. I also like how you ended it: exactly what I feel. Nice stuff. Genine** |
Sammy- B 12/12/04 . chapter 1thtas good, i like the ending |
JohnBarley 5/20/04 . chapter 1 Right on Sister! |
Kelsey Windsor 1/12/04 . chapter 1ahhaz.. had a big smile on my face with this one ) |
Medron Pryde 1/6/04 . chapter 1LOL Ok, that one is just plain funny. I love it! |