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Aged Parent Peggotty Barkis 2005-01-20 . chapter 1
I think this poem encapsulates what I sometimes feel like as a writer.

I can't think of any bad things to say.

I think by putting the words on separate lines makes the poem seem in slow motion and also seems like typing.
Genine 2004-12-31 . chapter 1
I like this, how the sentences make sense if you take them one at a time. I also like how you ended it: exactly what I feel. Nice stuff.

Genine**
Sammy- B 2004-12-12 . chapter 1
thtas good, i like the ending
JohnBarley 2004-05-20 . chapter 1
Right on Sister!
Kelsey Windsor 2004-01-12 . chapter 1
ahhaz.. had a big smile on my face with this one =)
Medron Pryde 2004-01-06 . chapter 1
LOL Ok, that one is just plain funny. I love it!
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