scary man, very freaky...but that's a good thing though, stories and poems that have vampires in them are supposed to be this addicting and dark.
your style of writing is excellent, you should probably think of getting your stories published, like Amelia Atwater-Rhodes. i recommend her to you, her books of vampires, witches and shapeshifters (mainly demons and vampires) are amazing. i like you'd like them, once you read the first chapter of any of her books...you'll be totally addicted till the very end.
read and review ya later!
-icy angelwings X

AHH! I didn't know you were such an outstanding poet! I wonder who that poem is dedicated to? Anyway, its good! Keep doing what your doing.

It may sound strange, I pictured Joan Of D'Ark. Some say lured by voices of the devil and raped by the world.

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can i say...wow. i got majog visuals with this one...very very good wording. i really, really like it. you've a really nice style of writing...lol XD

Very nice visuals in the beginning. You know my overactive imagination, Dru, I could see it all so clearly! So prettiful! ^_^ Powerful too~ Now post up that other poem you told me about, I want to read it (whines) That's it, I'm going to bite you when we get back to school -_- grr