*sigh* Imagery, images, whirling swirling images...whoo, I feel a little out of it right now...hehe...9.9 he XD
Awesomeness as usual, and spastic lines:
"stars litter the sky like paint"
(never thought of stars "littering" the sky...hmm...nice thought ^__^)
-Arii

Imagery is without question, your strongest point, not to mention lovely diction.
ARGH -dies from jealous rage- j/k
Your poems are always a delight to read.
-Cindy Moon *)

(MY COMPUTER CRASHED!)
Wow.. you'd be a good writer. the imagery >< something I'd never be good at. Wow, the last time I was at a chuch retreat... I feel so sad, cuz the last time was a long long time ago *sigh*

Wow. That was really good. Great descriptions!