Heehe... Smex. ^.^

It's very good so far...

Powerful and awe inspiring. My eyes are wide open, staring at this in amazement. Wonderful, wondrful job on this! Keep it up!

!~* Noelle *~!

Eternally powerful. Awe-stricking. Shocking. Great plot, greatly horrifying concept with just enough sex, and wonderfully intriguing characters.

this is a really good story, the suspense was killing me. Is there a conclusion?

I like this story.
Will there be a next chapter?

Well, this is probably your worst story thus far. Not that that's saying much of course. Decent writing, yet a bit unaccesible. I suppose it must be hard to top your earlier work.

This was a very strange story, I don't think I paid enough attention to get the ending properly, I'm going to have to re read it, so I do.
However, thw writing was Brilliant as always, plus you write very good sex. That probably makes your stuff worth reading all on it's own.

Hmm, the Batman quote seems oddly out of place here... ;)

Kanako seems to be a sexual beast. I've also noticed that she seems to have a commitment issue. She can never fully commit to just one of the girls. She constantly thinks of all of them or just the specific one she happens to be around. But it makes her seem pretty convicing, like someone I could run into on the street.

Story is well written, and characters are well developed. However it is distrubing to read some erotic scenes about Kanako and others characters are having. Especially when they are all girls... Well nevertheless the story is very good and please update ASAP!
P.S. Could read read my stories and write me a review? I wanted to know is my story good or not? Well Ciao & Merci!!

Well written, yet highly disturbing at the same time. Good.

While indeed the erotic scenes are top notch, the character(s) lack a certain credebility. Kanako for example, whom I think is supposed to be arrogant, selfish and strong of character and mind, does not so in a convincing way. Perhaps the mistake is where you are trying to make her a rational thinker and a dreamer at the same time. Such contradictions are hard to properly express in words.
Well, work on it and show us you can do better.

Your characters are as strong as ever, the writing as high quality, and the erotic scenes just as good as usual, but this story doesn't seem to grab me in the same way as some of your other work.
I think you're becoming to predictible.

This Kanako, like Yuki from "Yuki's Diary", is nothing more than a damn **. And you're they're ** pimp.