Greetings!
its so sad, the loss of emotion and self...ive had times where i felt the emotion has gone from me but its always returned. To have it gone forever would be devastating. It was also wonderfully written and flowed nicely.
Blessed be!

Excellent! This piece really took my breath away, I can't get over the passion in your words. You clearly have a lot of talent...
I also liked how you started and ended with the same line, it really put your point into detail. Nicely written. Keep up the good work. :)

really well put.
it would be a beautiful song.