I really like this, reminds me of a poem of my own Iced Love. But I think this could be developed a little more, is she trapped, does she break free...
But yeah I do really like this, don't know what else to write :) Thanks for the poem!

It doesn't seem like she is listening to her own words. I want her to act, instead of question them. It's like watching a movie and wanting to yell at the character not to go into danger.

Merry Meet,
How sad :( but unfortunately all too often true.
Thanx for the review,
Blessed Be,
Andaren x

wow. great poem. thank god it's not a true story... I'd be very worried. keep writing