Very sweet. Made me think of juicy fruit for no apparent reason. Could've been the apple I just ate. Heh. Anyway, this is another beautiful poem, despite how long ago you wrote it. I like it just as much as the other works. I hope I read more poetry from you, Rachel... (if not more VinXTifa goodness on ff.net!)

wow... I have always loved your writing and I look up to you as a writer.

Wow, so you've decided to post here at fictionpress, too? That's nice cuz this was very eloquent and what else? Yes, tragic for lack of a better word.
You know, I've been thinking of reading your CT fic so badly. I love the game and all, well... I've been planning to make a Magus pic, to make up for one I accidentally gave away(fie, nephew, how dare you steal what I gave you willingly O_o Does that make sense?) Anyway, when I'm finished, I might send it to you since you're fan of him, I think, yes? Anyway, I've digressed and rambled enough, sayonara ^_~
~Cursed/Elle/Metatrona, I have so many aliases, it's crazy =3

Hey, you've decided to post here too I see! Hehe. But of course, you are a poet too, eh?
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What a piece. Something so tragic and sad in this. Well this is an angst piece so what did I expect? ::shakes head:: Anyway, you have a number of brilliant phases in this piece. I love the "apparition/ghost" and "Phantom" references as well as the words "envious jade". Hm. Lovely that. The rhyme scheme was well done too. Nothing chidish or forced in them. Thanks for another read! Keep posting you XD
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That reminds me...*checks e-mail* I gotta get to the next chapter of "Flirting With Death"! Hopefully by tomorrow I'll have time to read it! So until then! Adieu...parting is such sweet sorrow ^_~
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May the writing live on!
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Jess 0:o)